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Re: Ballad of the Blood (2)
Hey it IR and this is chapter two. I sorry if its a little sloppy and confusing. I had to get my homework done before i went to church. I ...
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Re: It Ends Tonight
Hello. IR Ir here to review your poem. I really liked the Ipod idea. I don't know if its plagiarism or not but i doubt it. When You’re Around, I’m ...
Oct 7, 2009 -
Re: my first post...
Hi its IR here. Its a pleasure to review your first poem!!! Poetry it really awesome by the way. The words themselves are brilliant. But some things to touch up ...
Oct 7, 2009 -
Re: Behind The Looking Glass: The Awakening (Chapter 1)
Yo, its IR. Nice story. I love the first person view because you can really see into the characters head. Its also a great idea to have both of the ...
Oct 7, 2009 -
Re: Meetings, New Lords, and Well-Worn Swords
Hey its IR. I ready your story and liked it. I don't know if you've read mine ( its called Fire Burns Deep) but our stories are much alike. I ...
Oct 7, 2009 -
Re: Gang Wars
Real Name: Judas Kiss Gang Leader: Doll Appearance: Chalk white hair and face. Hair is long and slicked neatly back. Eyes are completely black. A black tattoo over his mouth ...
Oct 6, 2009 -
Re: Gang Wars
Hey this is my first storybook but i think it could be awesome. Basically, your character will be a gang leader. The heroes and villains will fight over the control ...
Oct 6, 2009 -
Re: Zombie Land
My eyes snapped open. A high pitched scream ripped through the night, making me wrinkle my noise and cup a hand over one of my ears. It was a normal ...
Oct 6, 2009 -
Re: Zombie Land
is that good? Ill be anybodies friend. PM me
Oct 5, 2009 -
Re: Zombie Land
Phelix You'd think that when the world started to end, there would be a chance of survival. In my case, i couldn't find one. I stood,a hundred feet off the ...
Oct 5, 2009 -
Re: Ballad of the Blood (1)
Hello. This is the real story here. I hope you like it. Please comment even if just to say its good! Note: Read (0) before you read this. This is ...
Oct 5, 2009 -
Re: Green to White
Hi its IR. Its a pleasure to review your poem. I hope you find it helpful. Ok. the first thing i saw was the old language. I really made it ...
Oct 5, 2009 -
Re: The Janitors Prologue (Trash)
Hey. Its IR here to review. I hope you get something out of this. He ticked an objective: the only objective on the page that had not been ticked. i ...
Oct 5, 2009 -
Re: Zombie Land D.T
this is my idea. There was a genetic enhancement that was being used on poor people. It was supposed to enhance all the senses and strength. It was called Zomme ...
Oct 5, 2009 -
Re: Turning The Knives 7
Hey its IR. Its a pleasure to review your story and i hope you find it helpful away from their hiding spot as they filled with water. I got a ...
Oct 5, 2009
